After the response I got with my first post under this section I have been upon cloud nine; and I’m still there. :p
Well! The most difficult job is to be better than how you were yesterday. And this is what I love to do.
But, seriously its really very tedious.
I wanted to acknowledge one more thing that I have a different style of writing Urdu poetry.
“Simple words; deeper meanings.”
This is exactly what I had been working upon the most into my works.
So, here I come
With the second one:
PS- The way you read an Urdu poetry is what creates the difference.
Tu jagah-jagah ki na baat kar
Kabhi khud se bhi_Toh baat kar
Milega tujhe kahin aur nahin
Agar wo Khuda tere dil mein nahin
You address not about places so mere
Speak to yourself sometimes clear
You shall find Him no where near
If He is not in your heart dear
–Saiz
This is beautiful. Ah, I just, I love this. Simple words deep meaning. I literally read the urdu version aloud. Well done 👏 👏
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Thank you so much. Your words of appreciation really instigate me to give the best I could.
This was really close to my heart. Thanks again. 🙂
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The rhyming in English translation is great 😉
Keep it up 🙂
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Why do you always notice the things no one cares to talk about? 😉 😛
I mean. Why? 😀
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Well, that’s me.
Its all I have to say 😀
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So, that’s all I have to believe. Right? 😀
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Absolutely.
Why would there be are other things to believe when I have told you the fact ?
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Oh! Fact. Shuqriya … 🙂
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You say such beautiful things with simple words. 🙂
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That was a beautiful comment btw. Exactly what I had wished to listen upon this post. Thanks a lot. 🙂
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Wow! This time I didn’t read the English translation. It is simple yet powerful. God resides inside of us. What a beautiful message 😊 looking forward to the third post in this section 😊
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The Urdu section itself was so easy that there wasn’t a need of an English part of it.
This one was one of my favorite. I’m really happy that you appreciated it.
I hope the forthcoming would turn out to be a better on perhaps. 🙂
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This is my favourite of all. So beautiful and like you said, simple words, deeper meanings. In such a few words, you touched the heart with raw emotions. Wonderful.
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Thanks a ton Ma’am. I love this one a lot too.
Hope you like the further ones too. 😛
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I know I will 🙂 Keep em coming
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So stubborn in a positivism for me. 🙂 Thanks a lot…
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Oh God. This. *Speechless*
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ehheee…..shukriya…shukriya…
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