I tried hard to maintain the new style into this streak. I just did not get the confidence.
I’ll let your comments decide. Drop by one.
Ham bhool gaye
Kya bhoole the
Aaye the
Ya bheje the
Chale, gire
Gir ke uthe
Par bhool gaye
Jo the paas khade
Ham bhool gaye
Kya bhoole the
Ghairon ki toh
Baat niraali
Jab apno ko
Ham chhor chale
Ham bhool gaye
Kya bhoole the
Maqsad ka
Kuchh pata nahi
Zindagi se
Koii wafaa nahi
Jo yaad karege
Wohi yaad rahega
Ye usool bane hain
Ab ham bade hain
Hoti agar barsaat adhuri
Firte dar-dar chori-chori
Ab toh dekho khud ko tum
Zindagi toh yun hi kategi
Ab jaan bhi lo
Ab waqt haii kam
Kabhi puchh bhi lo
Khud se tum
Aur sunao
Kaise ho
Badle ho
Ya waise ho
Aankhon mein
Dhadkan ke
Raag tum
Samaete ho
Rab ka tum rasta
Pahchante kyun nahi
Ya seene mein basta
Tumhare ab dil nahi
Ab yaad nahi
Ke yaad haii
Ham bhoole the
Ki bhool gaye
Ham bhool gaye
Kya bhoole the
Aaye the
Ya bheje the
Note: In case if you missed the previous number.
Here’s the link to Maqsad e Hayaat-Post 1
_Saiz
Wowww, I’m not very good at the whole reading Urdu thing, but I understood this! This paragraph:
”Aur sunao
Kaise ho
Badle ho
Ya waise ho”
It hit me. Beautiful stuff.
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You did a great job 😊
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Perfect! Ekdum perfect. ☺
You write reallly well! Aapki poems read karke naa ek feel aata hai, its amazing! ☺
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Now I am more confined than confident.
I feel I did some pretty good with this. 😊
I’m glad I could make an impact.
Pray for me. ☺
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Yes, you are doing really good. I feel so happy to connect with such amazing people over here. I am learning something everyday! Thanks, just keep writing. I pray for you always! ☺☺
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Great job 🙂
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Jazak Allah
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Ameen
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Beautiful 🙂
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I’m glad you felt that. 🙂
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This is not bad actually.
Well done, Saiz 🙂
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Hah…you mean to say your Urdu isn’t that bad. 😛
Thank you for your precious time, Hiba.:-)
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