Whenever I write anything. The first reviewer becomes me. And I am always trying to be true to myself. I liked this one. Hope to see your responses.
Its number nine now. I wish I could end this romanticism on a high note.
Please. Go ahead.
*urdu poetry*
Manzilein bhi uski thi_Raasta bhi uska tha
Bahot khaamosh rehta tha_Shayad Khuda bhi uska tha
Mujhe jeene ka hausla deta_Wo waasta bhi uska tha
Jo raaton ko saath jagta_Wo saaya bhi uska tha
Saath chalne ki zid bhi uski
Bichhar jaane ka faisla bhi uska tha
Shab e aakhir ki dehleez par baitha raha
Sulagta raha fakat iss soch mein_Ke khata’vaar kaun tha
Ham bhi wahi hain_Wahi haii andaaz apna
Tum badal gaye ho ‘Ahmad’_Yehi ilzam uska tha
_Saiz
So beautiful ..please keep posting (:
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Very well written Ahmad Saiz.
‘Ham bhi wahi hain_Wahi haii andaaz apna
Tum badal gaye ho ‘Ahmad’_Yehi ilzam uska tha’ – Beautifully penned down. Lovely.
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Shukriya aapka
And you are doing well with your blog.
Getting unnoticed works to get noticed. I once thought about this. Now that has been fulfilled.
All the best with your blog.
Just keep going.
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This is a great piece of work.
Absolutely loved the thought and writing.
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I’m truly honored to receive such a lovely response.
I’m humbled. 🙂
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Keep up the good writing 🙂
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Sure. In Sha Allah 🙂
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Hehe, this one was sweet and simple, I just loved this, ye wali meri favourite! 🙂
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This is beautiful Ahmad, from my little urdu understanding 😄
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Nice! It has great flow.
khata’vaar?
What does that mean?
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I was thinking the same Inky. Khatakaar is the word, no? The one who makes mistakes?
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khatakaar means a criminal or someone who repeatedly commit sins. 🙂
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That’s what I thought. 🙄
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Thanks a lot. My blog had been missing you. 😉
khata’vaar is one who is liable to sin or make mistakes.
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Welcome 🙂
So it is khata kaar. :3
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Nooo…it is khata’vaar
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Thumbs up. I guess I had read the last couplet before. Anyway, that was smooth. (y)
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You are really one smart girl at guesses. 😉 Thanks for your time. Maybe less than three this time.
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Are you thanking everyone for their time these days? That’s a good thing to practice tho.
Five minutes. To be exact. Spent too much time in getting my dropped jaw back at its place.
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