Once upon a time…
Lived he and she
In a time so prime
Forever, to be.
Rude,was he.
Cute, was she.
Young, were they.
Dumb? No way.
Ordinary, he was.
Elegant, she was.
Strangely, they met.
Eyes, dilate.
Aberrant? No, wait.
Little, they ameliorate.
Dreams, of her.
Eden. Sober.
Ardent, was he.
Despite, homely.
One day, she spoke
Listen! O bloke.
Shied, did he.
Blinked, “Now see.”
Help, she needed.
Seemed, they blended.
Notebooks, completed.
Hairstyle, he mended.
Now someone, he was
Yet, famed, she was.
Friends, they became.
Reached, to fame.
Thoughts, of him
Slowly, to rim.
Converge, they did.
Slowly, they slid.
Words, said they.
Daily, some way.
He’s feeling,
She thought.
On confronting,
He brought.
Diffident, he hummed.
Dolorous, she turned.
“I’m sorry”, I believed.
Why? You deceived.
Misconstrued, did she.
Innocent, was he.
He moaned.
He cried.
“Listen. Once please.”
Strained.
She replied,
“Please. Just leave.”
Then one day.
Who did it?
He then knew.
Everything.
Seemed so new.
Threatened, was he.
Alone. To antipathy.
Enemies, of him.
Broke, his dream.
Glances, were spared.
Disabused? He never.
Friendly, they left.
Hatred, was felt.
Truth, was hidden.
From her, forbidden.
How long? He said.
May be. I’m glad.
Her heart, once melt.
Someway, of guilt.
Sorry, said she.
Stern, was he.
“Please. Forgive.
Forget. Gently.”
“Off now. Truly.
Forgot. Harshly.”
Something, was pretended.
That day, it ended.
Pain, to name.
Strangers, again.
No one, knew why.
Mimed. He lied.
They met, everyday.
But never said, a ‘Hey’.
Severed, they blew.
Reasons? Just a few.
A fable, was made
Quoted, it read:
“Strangely, they met;
Friends, they became.
Friendly, they left;
Strangers, again.”
_Saiz
SAIZ…. I know this was from your heart.. I know some feeling deep rooted made you a dart! I know this cant be avoided!! BUT I certainly know you were a huge part of all this! isn’t it true??? 😉 Maaaaaaaaaaaan this totally touched me inside out!! Without a doubt!!! I love this piece!! I am soo in love with it!! And you were right! 😉 Hahaha!! To be honest this is my favorite among the whole lot u wrote till now! 😉
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No Ishma, its a NO.
Calm down . Calm down.
I see your excitement has made you a “chalti-firti” poet. ahah 😀
Its purely fictitious. It can’t be real. No where on this earth even. 🙂
But, I’m glad you loved it.
Your favorite is my favorite. Trust me. 😀
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hahahaha!! Really? 😛 Lol…. Yes I can see! 😛 Bro, know you are amazing! 😉 Don’t de value yourself! 😛 Never
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Whoa!! What a read!! And the flow.. The rhythm.. Superb! 🙂
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I’m so delighted at your comment. Thanks for reading. 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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Ah ha maza aa gaya. After reading your poetry, sometimes I really feel pity on guys. R they really so emotional? Full of true love kinda? Surely you are improving image of all the guys in my eyes. 🙂
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I’m pleased to hear that.
Where had you been for so long? My blog missed you even. 🙂
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I liked the rhythm.
Very well written, Saiz. 🙂
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I’m glad to hear that. 🙂
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Wow that was amaaaazziiingg! Might be one of your best ever dude! Keep the perfect poetry going 👌
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Your ‘amaaaazziiingg’ was more than amazing.
Thank you so very much. 🙂
Best one? 😋 ahhha…
Hope so. 😔
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Wowed much.
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I’m glad so much. 🙂
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Glad that you’re glad.
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Sir, this one is wonderful!! ☺☺
Is that your real story? I could feel the depth of those emotions! Truly heart touching. ☺
Haha, after having written this one, how could you even think about quitting?? 😜
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Thank you so much Ma’am.
Real story? Haan bhi..aur nahi bhi..
Actually. Mine was a simple one.
I’ve made a lot of alterations and additions into this one. Friction. 😛
Haha…thanks again… I’m glad you liked it so much.
Quitting? Ending would be more appropriate word. 😉
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Haha, thankyou for that extreme level of respect! 😇
Achha still it’s soo real!
Aur aapko haina koi nai samjha sakta. Ending ya quitting jo bhi hai, nai karna na. 😐
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Extreme? That was the first stage.
You never know what can happen. So, keep blogging. 🙂
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Ahahah! Achhaa?? 😁
You too keeeeep blogging, pleeeease! 😅
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Dayum mahn! You are one hell of a writer! This was goooddddd!! Keep writing please!!
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Thanks a lot dude. You’re equally good too.
I wish to continue. Ha’laat nasaaz hain magar.
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You’re welcome 🙂 Halaat azal se leaky abad tak nasaazgar hi rehtay hain mian. Jis haal mai jeena mushkil ho, us haal mai jeena lazim ha 🙂 I hope everything gets okay 🙂 Stay strong 🙂
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In Sha Allah 🙂
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🙂
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