Andaaz e Bayaan #4. Uss roz jab uthega woh

Someone asked me, “How are you so romantic? You must have been in love for long and hard. Isn’t it?
I smiled and said, “No,  but I have been loved a lot. And for long and hard.

I wrote this one imagining how a couple would be feeling on the day of their marriage. I am imagining a lot these days about marriages. More posts coming in.

Go ahead.  with this one

*pic credits @googleimages

Uss roz jab uthega woh bistar se
Kadam takrayenge arsh se uske

Kabhi sochta tha main ke
Shikwa, Na koii gila kare
Fakat mere liye wo jiya kare
Mere jeene ki woh wajeh bane
Koii aisa shakhs bhi hua kare
Main rokun usay aur woh mujhe pyaar kare

Sach ho aaya haii sapna ye aaj mera
Ab chaahat nahi ke mujhe kuchh aur mile
Raat jo chaand dekha tha sitaaron ke darmiyaan
Utar aaya haii zameen pe wo paas mere

Deedaar mera pehla ho_iss shart pe
Hua hoga taiyyar_woh taiyyar hone ke liye
Sir jhuka ke woh bhi toh sochta hoga
Kya mere liye woh_issi tarah bekaraar hoga

Bass chand lamhon ke baad aansu chhalak aayenge
Aankhein hongi band aur wo paas mujhe paayenge
Mujhse guftagu kar ke woh bhi toh sharmaayenge
Phir palkein utha ke woh zara itraayenge

Jab uthega rukh se parda unke
Toh kahengi unki saheliyan unse
Aaj toh bade betaab honge aapke hone wale
Toh sharma ke kahengi wo aahista se
Ab toh sirf rasm baaqi haii
Wo meri kismat mein_Rab ki zubaani haii

Phir jab hoga saamna unka aaine se
Toh aaine se bhi raha na jaayega
Keh dega shaan se woh dil ki baat mere
Aaj toh be’maut marenge tujhpe marne wale

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Note: Don’t ask me if I’m in love or if I’m heart-broken by the kind of words that I write; because sometimes I write about feelings I have never felt before.
And no, I’m not getting married. 

Here are links to the previous numbers, in case if you missed those and wanted to see.

Andaaz e Bayaan Post Three

Andaaz e Bayaan Post Two

Andaaz e Bayaan Post Three

And here’s to the whole series.
Andaaz e Bayaan Series

_Saiz


47 thoughts on “Andaaz e Bayaan #4. Uss roz jab uthega woh

  1. Hello saiz, I wandered my way here and it’s nice to meet someone as enthusiastic about Urdu poetry as I am. You almost make me want to post the rest of my poetry which never made it to the blog. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Cheers.
    PS, if you would like to read some of my weak attempts at shayeri, do head over to my blog sometime.

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  2. hi,

    I want to have a guest post in ur blog of my poetries, shayaries & ghazals.
    do u have such provision.if yes,then how can I do so..& if no..then can please suggest where I can post as a guest blogger or can give some links those bloggers with large no of followers & who allows guest posts

    regards
    AATIF

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    1. Salam,
      I haven’t yet had any such venture on my blog. And I don’t know much about where to guest blog even. But, this sounds good to me.
      So, I think I should start this thing on my blog. And you’re welcome to submit your work through Email.
      Drop me a mail at: ahmadsaiz@outlook.com
      I’ll accept guest blog posts from now on In Sha Allah.
      I hope you’re having a good time reading and writing poetries. 🙂
      All the best. Sire.

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  3. Erm and I used to find urdu poetry which was romantic cheesy. But this. Whoosh.
    And these lines
    Ab toh sirf rasm baaqi haii
    Wo meri kismat mein_Rab ki zubaani haii
    You are good Sir
    Congratulations. Its time. May the rest of us singles find engagement rings too lol. Ameen

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    1. That’s very kind of you to say that Aniqa.
      That made me smile-off my teeth. 😛
      But, no. It’s not time yet.
      I said, “I am about to.” Just the talks were on between families.
      But, that did not work out eventually.
      Allah knows best.

      Please be around for more Urdu Poetry. See you.

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    1. haii na…I knew it.
      Thanks Hargun for the well-wishes. But, I’m not engaged yet. I’m about to.
      Poem ki tareef k liye bahot bahot shukriya…
      An Sorry for not being able to put forth the Saiz quote on your Mundane Monday’s. 😆
      Into my 3rd year of my engg. You could guess my misery now. I miss those. I’ve seen them al though. ☺☺
      Have a peaceful life ahead.

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      1. You are welcome. Its okay about the mundane Monday’s, its been a while I participated in that event.
        But good to know about engg…but when did u shift over from CS?

        Wish you a peaceful life too 🙂

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  4. Aaawww!! Sirr!! 😍😍😍😍
    This one was killller! I love this. ☺☺
    Hehe, aap sach me bohottt romantic ho! ❤
    I love every line of this poem! And BTW, big congratulations for your engagement! 😇😇😇😇

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    1. Can’t you stop calling me sir? aesa lagta h main tmhare sir pe sawar hun…😆
      thanks to you for calling me a romantic even….hahaa….not yet engaged..I’m just about to.

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