Nuks toh unn mein hote hain_ Jinhein insaani taameer milti haii
Mere Rab ke haathon ka noor toh_Uska chehra bataata haii
Mera hamnava Mera ishq e jaan _Harr simt mera hi rehta haii
Namaz e shukr adaa karne mein_Saaya bann ke jhukta haii
Yaqeenan ishq haii tumse_Ye mera dil bhi kehta haii
Masroofiyat jab bhi hoti haii_Khayaal tera hi rehta haii
Suno, ye zidd chhor do na tum_Mujhe manaana nahi aata
Wo jab jab muskuraata haii_Mujhe Jannat sa lagta haii
-Saiz
Ghaziabad, Uttar Pradesh, India
How could someone write so beautifully
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I just try. But, it’s very kind of you to say that, Sana. Thank you.
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wah wah kya baat hai janab….first two lines are just amazing…and lines of masrufiyat..uff kya kehna.this line really goes very well with my situation.
Allhumma barak laha 🙂
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Thanks so much farheen Ma’am.
Isay bhi aapko dedicate kar dun kya??? 😛 😛
It feels so good to see such beautiful comments where people actually mention the part they liked the most.:)
Keep reading. I wrote a couple more even. 🙂
And I forgot to tell you that I did Liebster award post, the one in which you nominated me.
https://ahmadsaiz.wordpress.com/2015/10/24/liebster-award/
Here it is. Answers to your questions.
And don’t forget to mention if I did justice to your precious nomination. 🙂
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Ohh neki aur puch puch…karo karo dedicate 🙂 Hey you had told me about libster award answers. I think I forgot to comment on that. Will do it In Sha Allah.
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Next time when I’ll post one, I’ll put your name in the beginning. Hope it doesn’t bother you. 😉
And I’m waiting for your comment. I put a real effort upon that post in fact. 🙂
In Sha Allah
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Wow *-*
MashaAllah you have a way with words!
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ehehe….
thank you…so soooo much…
Made my day. 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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Your poetry makes me go round and round each time. (sorry Taylor Swift, I stole a lyric from you.) 😀
How. How do you do this?
I literally loved the last couplet. So subtly flowing it is. When is the next post coming up? Make it arrive soonish, Please? 🙂
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achha…
ohh…that (round and round…coincidence,,,I did not really have any idea about this…trust me..or else I would have never mentioned that..:P
Limiting this to three this time. 🙂 Sorry about that!
This segment did not work out the way I wanted it to. 🙂
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Hahah. nobody has that idea so its alright 🙂
Oh. I’m gonna miss it.
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There already have been a couple more and you said nothing about them. 😦
I miss it?
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Because I was left speechless. I didn’t have words to say what I felt about them.
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This didn’t even need English translation because the beauty of your words transcends it.
I really really love this one. The first two lines and also masroofiyat jab bhi hoti hai khayaal tetra rahta hai
And the last two lines are so beautiful that it made me smile.
You know what, I love each and every line to be honest 🙂
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Ahha …that was so moving. 😊
Thanks a lo Ma’am for being a magnificent motivator.
I am glad the hard work payed-off.
Hahaaa….each line, that was nice…☺
Thank you so much for being such a nice reader and taking time commenting upon it.
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My pleasure Ahmad. Glad to have your beautiful poetry decorating my feed each day.
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What a compliment! 🙂
Beautiful! 🙂
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